BBC: Rowling Says Two Potter Books Need Re-Writes (2012) — Which Ones?

In a 2012 interview with the BBC about the publication of Casual Vacancy, her first post Potter work, Rowling said that there were two times during Harry’s seven years at Hogwarts (and the eleven years, 1997-2007, it took to get his adventures into print) that she wished she’d had more time to polish the work in question:

I’m proud of [Casual Vacancy], I like it, and if you can say that, however nervous you are on publication day, you’re streets ahead of the game. Because to put out something you’re not that happy with or that you think “God, I wish I’d had another year to rework it”, and I have been in that position, is very different.

When were you in that position?

There were a couple of the Potters and I definitely knew that they needed another year. There’s one towards the beginning and there’s one towards the end, that I definitely felt that about. I had to write on the run and there were times when it was really tough. And I read them, and I think “Oh God, maybe I’ll go back and do a director’s cut”. I don’t know.

After the jump I’ll share my best guesses about which two books these are and invite your counter selections!

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‘Full Circle’ Thoughts on the Narniad: LWW’s Ring Composition and Alchemy

I gave a series of seven talks at Oklahoma City’s Full Circle Bookstore on the subject of the artistry and meaning of C. S. Lewis’ Chronicles of Narnia. Recordings are available as an ‘extra’ to anyone signing up for my Wizard Reading Formula course online (about which, ‘stay tuned’). To the delight of my inner Gilderoy last night, I found a review of the first class that was written by a student taking a public speaking course at a local college.

If C. S. Lewis or talks by the Hogwarts Professor in person are of any interest to you, that evaluation of my class content and delivery are after the jump. Feel free to let me know what you think of this student’s judgment and of the content he describes!

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Was Paulo Coelho’s ‘The Alchemist’ Inspiration for ‘Philosopher’s Stone’?

If you gathered in one place every writer in the last twenty years who was inspired to sit down and start writing the novel of his or her dreams by the success ‘out of nowhere’ of J. K. Rowling and her Harry Potter novels, my guess is that city would rival Mexico City or at least London with respect to the number of inhabitants (and what a metropolis of lost souls that would be!). My thought-question for Potter Pundits this week is, “Was Rowling similarly inspired by a run away out-of-nowhere best seller from a ‘nobody’ to start writing her magical seven book series?”

I think it very probable that she was, though in all my years of Potter puttering I’ve never seen this specific influence suggested. The author and book I have in mind, for example, doesn’t make the extensive to the point of absurdity Wikipedia list of ‘Rowling Influences and Analogues.’

The novel is The Alchemist by Paulo Coelho. It has supposedly sold over 65 million copies and that figure means it is ranked in the top twenty best selling books of all time (see here, here, and here). If you haven’t read the book, here are three things I’ve learned after finally reading it myself.

  • Coelho’s Publication Story is as Miraculous as Rowling’s: He wrote The Alchemist in two weeks. He is Brazilian, so it is in Portugese. A publisher picked it up, it sold reasonably well (900 copies!), but they gave up on it and returned the publication rights to the author. He found another Brazilian publisher, a larger house, to pick it up and the second edition sold very well — in Brazil and Portugal. In 1993, HarperCollins publishes the translation in English and The Alchemist begins its climb to juggernaut status.
  • It’s More Jonathan Livingstone Seagull than War and Peace: The take-away of the story is that, if you only believe in yourself and your dream long enough, “the universe will conspire to make your dream come true.” It’s not literature by any stretch but it is an uplifting couple of hours you won’t regret spending; think The Little Prince, The Life of Pi, even The Shack. Matt Morris ranks The Alchemist as ‘The Best Self Help Book of All Time.’
  • It Really Does Feature an Alchemist: Well, eventually. And it isn’t literary alchemy like Shakespeare, Nabokov, C. S. Lewis, Rowling, Collins, or Meyer writes. But it is fun and communicates a core truth of the alchemists, what Rowling on PotterMore says is that it is a “spiritual journey” and that there is “a mystical element to the work.” 

Why do I think it likely, even probable, that Rowling was inspired by Coelho’s unlikely success to give her books an alchemical twist?

(1) The Rowling-Potter Timeline: Rowling has her train delay inspiration for Harry’s character and story in July of 1990. She moves to Portugal in 1991 after her mother’s death and lives there until December 1993. These are the year’s of The Alchemist’s breaking all sales records for books in Portuguese. It would have been impossible for her to have been a reading person alive in Porto, Portugal, in these years and not been aware of The Alchemist and Coelho’s rags to riches story.

(2) The Stories: Each is a there and back again coming of age adventure about a young man realizing his unbelievable destiny via making the sacrificial hard choices.

(3) The Alchemy: Each of the boys is guided by an alchemist whose teaching is about the unity of all things in the consciousness fabric of reality. And the transformation in Santiago, the boy hero of The Alchemist, is as magical and wonderful as what Harry discovers about himself and the world at Hogwarts.

One more note before I let you go to read the story — Coelho has made it free for anyone to download online — Rowling’s first drafts of Philosopher’s Stone was much more obviously alchemical than the one published in 1997.

There were several discarded opening chapters for Book 1, one of which had a muggle betraying the Potters, one had a character called ‘Pyrites,’ whose name means ‘fools gold’ meeting Sirius in front of the Potter’s house. Pyrites was a servant of Voldemort. …

Very early page of Book1: Argis Pyrites mentioned as author of Alchemy, Ancient Art and Science

Rowling also writes on PotterMore that Alchemy was the original Potions class at Hogwarts:

A slightly different list of school subjects appears in my earliest notes. Herbology is called ‘Herbalism’, Divination is compulsory from the first year, as are Alchemy and a subject called simply ‘Beasts’, whereas Transfiguration is called ‘Transfiguration/Metamorphosis’

Rowling was even dreaming about alchemists when she started writing Stone. You’ll forgive me for thinking that Severus Snape was originally conceived us as Argis Pyrites, Alchemy Master. More important, the alchemy was much more in the open rather than a subtlety for closer readers to become aware of on repeated readings. I think she worked to imitate the better literary alchemists — and to distance herself from Paulo Coelho’s The Alchemist, a deceit that has been remarkably successful especially considering Philosopher’s Stone and The Alchemist sit side by side on many ‘Best Selling Books of All Time’ lists.

Click on ‘Leave a Comment’ up by this post’s headline and let me know what you think!

Free ($0) Audible Books and Interviews

Lethal White was the first Cormoran Strike novel for which I did not buy the jewel case audio CD set. I may eventually get it if I see one at a library sale just to complete my Rowling audio collection for the bookshelf but my family has been won over by the offers on Amazon’s Audible on price points and convenience. It was fun listening to Lethal White (and Rosmersholm) on endless repeat for the better part of a month when my Muggle job allowed me to do that. 

Last week I spent two monthly credits to buy the Career of Evil and Prisoner of Azkaban audio editions on Audible because we couldn’t get the CDs we already owned to transfer to my son’s iPod (Yes, I’ll be doing another post for Career and Prisoner just like the one I did for Lethal White and Goblet). Audible was so pleased that I bought two books in one month that they sent me a $5 gift certificate to use at their site. I searched their ‘Best Books for Under $10’ file and purchased Jane Austen’s Sense and Sensibility for $4.86.

But I was curious. How much could I download from Audible for free? It turns out the answer is quite a lot — and if you’re willing to spend $1 for whole sets of books and plays, you’ll be listening to fun books and interviews with authors you like in free time you might otherwise spend driving or walking the dog along with your free thoughts. Join me after the jump if you’re interested in seeing how I found the ‘Free Page’ at Audible, and, no, I’m not getting a kick back if you sign up for Amazon’s audio book outlet.

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Lethal White: Every Goblet of Fire Link?

One of the first things I was obliged to write after a hurried reading of Lethal White was whether there were links between Strike4 and Goblet of Fire, the fourth Harry Potter novel. Does Lethal White Echo Goblet of Fire? It has been an ongoing topic of conversation here that Rowling-as-Galbraith seems to be a writing a series in parallel with and commentary on the corresponding number in the Hogwarts Saga with each Cormoran Strike mystery. My first report was that Lethal White certainly did in fact parallel Goblet in fascinating ways. I listed seven points that popped up on my first trip through the book; Louise Freeman, who had guessed two years ago that the London Olympics would serve as a Quidditch World Cup/Triwizard Tournament equivalent background in the fourth book, and Evan Willis contributed several more on that post’s comment thread. You can read or review via this link that first Goblet-Lethal post on HogwartsProfessor.

I resolved to re-read Goblet of Fire after reading Lethal White several times to see what parallels I’d missed, if any. I am putting together the Pillar Post for Lethal White now and have to finish off and put up all the draft posts in queue on that subject before I do. After the jump, then, a list of the thirty-three (33!) echoes and correspondences between Potter4 and Strike4 for your consideration, correction, and co-operation; please add the ones I missed in the comment thread by clicking on ‘Leave a Comment’ above!

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