Unlocking ‘Fantastic Beasts,’ Part 3 — Six Screenplay Scenes Deleted From Fantastic Beasts & Where to Find Them

cut2The most fun part of getting a DVD of a favorite film is watching ‘the extras.’ I love seeing the outtakes, the old trailers, and especially the deleted scenes.

I don’t think watching the deleted scenes of Fantastic Beasts, however, is going to be exciting or enjoyable that way. For one thing, we know about six of them already, so the surprise is gone.

cut1And, frankly, because what they cut were scenes that Rowling wrote in her actual “original screenplay,” we’re having to see what the producer and director decided “didn’t work” as extras rather than as the story Rowling imagined and wrote it. For Rowling fans, that’s a bit like learning there was a publisher’s error at the print shop and six chapters of her novel aren’t in the hard cover edition we paid for. Posting them online for us to experience six months later and separately from the film is not giving us the story as our favorite story teller wrote it.

After the jump, I’ve written up a list of the six cut scenes and the words of the film makers and actors about them (each change in color represents a change in source material; follow the embedded links for the original interviews and stories). I’ll close with the importance of two cut scenes in light of Rowling’s writing artistry and some thoughts on the other four. Enjoy!

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Is It a Ring? First Thoughts on Rowling’s Fantastic Beasts & Where to Find Them

newt-scamanderThe movie made from J. K. Rowling’s Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them screenplay is a visual ring composition. I have not received my copy of the screenplay yet (come back Wednesday of next week for more on that) but, having watched the film yesterday and taken four pages of notes in the dark, I can say the film’s scenes conform to the chiasmus or ring formula that anthropologist Mary Douglas describes in her Thinking in Circles and which J. K. Rowling uses as something of a template for her Harry Potter and Cormoran Strike novels.

If you haven’t seen the movie and don’t want to be spoiled, okay. That paragraph should be your last. If you have seen the film and would like to see how Rowling brought her ring artistry to the third draft of her screenplay, I’ll see you after the jump. [Read more…]

Austen and Rowling: On the Virtue of Penetration in Life and Reading

In 2010 I wrote in response to Prof Baird’-Hardy’s third brilliant post on Jane Eyre that:

AustenDickens and Austen frequently discuss (through preferred characters) the virtue of “penetration,” i.e., seeing the ‘inside bigger than the outside’ of others, their virtues or vices which constitute character or the lack of it, rather than focusing on the surface. Georgian and Victorian writers, to include Bronte, understood that they were “instructing while delighting,” and instructive most especially in the virtue of “penetration.” Readers were exercising their powers of inner heart reflection and recognition as they entered into and experienced the lives of what were principally minor gentry and aristocrats. This is “manners and morals” fiction at its best.

Katy asks six years later:

Hi! This is so fascinating. I know I am years too late, but a hail Mary pass just in case: John, do you have a source for Austen and/or Dickens discussing the virtues of “penetration”? Where do they mention seeing “the inside bigger than the outside”? Thanks so much!

Austen EmmaI do not have a source “for Austen and/or Dickens discussing the virtues of ‘penetration,” alas. It is something that I have noticed in almost every book by these authors, however; they use the word and illustrate it as a virtue to cultivate and admire (and as a quality whose absence marks the stupid, dull, or wicked).

Take for example, Austen’s Emma, the book J. K. Rowling claims to have read twenty times in succession before writing Philosopher’s Stone, one assumes to get a grip on the narrative voice she adopts in Stone (third person limited omniscient) to set up the “biggest twist in English literature” at which she said “all authors aim” to best. Emma is loaded with examples of and references to the virtue of penetration.

I’d go so far as to claim, in fact, that the principal virtue in Austen’s Emma is this quality of ‘penetration,’ a mental vision that sees beneath the surface of individuals and their actions to see her character. I found on a recent re-reading seven instances of some form of the word in the book with several other passages in which the quality is described with other terms (cf., especially Emma’s discussion with Mr. Knightley about her feelings for Frank Churchill before Knightley’s proposal in which she chides herself for not seeing through him: “yet it may not be the more excusable in one who sets up as I do for Understanding;” Vol. 3, ch. 13). [Read more…]

Guest Post: Keep Your Eye on the Ball! Circular Imagery in New ‘Force Awakens’ Echoes the Rings in Harry Potter?

Kylo 2Keep Your Eye on the Ball
by Emily Strand

J.K. Rowling has insisted many times that there will not be an eighth Harry Potter book because, after Deathly Hallows, Harry’s story is essentially complete. She will fill in the details for us on Pottermore and explore tangential characters in other works for stage and screen, but of Harry’s life we will hear no more of consequence. Unlike Rowling, to my knowledge, George Lucas has never alluded to such an ending point in his Star Wars saga. Even Lucas’ own supposed retirement is merely the passing of the franchise’s heavy mantle of story creation to others to continue. Like Hubble’s discovery that the universe is expanding from a single point, so the Star Wars narrative seems to expand in all directions from a single, vague bit of context: “a long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away.”

f39171174And while the Star Wars narrative’s infinitely expanding character differentiates it from Rowling’s universe, their audiences (which include many of the same fans) are attracted to both these epic tales due in part to the careful and related internal organization of each. In both Star Wars and Harry Potter, the repetition of significant elements in intentional ways serves to make the most of each narrative’s best qualities, while pointing to important themes and ideas which will come to bear significantly on the plot, characters and outcomes of the story. Simply put, both Star Wars and Harry Potter are ring cycles.

Before we suppose ring composition was something the Potter books simply borrowed wholesale from Star Wars, we need to be reminded of the ancient tradition of ring composition Lucas and Rowling both drew upon to create their sagas (for a fine, 2000-year old example, read the Gospel of Luke and the Acts of the Apostles back-to-back). Brave souls like Mike Klimo and John Granger have meticulously laid out the precise ways in which Star Wars (episodes 1-6) and the Harry Potter books, respectively, form organized, symbolic, concentric circles within themselves and as a whole until the ring is complete.

But what does a complete ring look like in a story which, in Star Wars’ case, goes on and on?

SW3The short answer is: it will be difficult to say until this new cycle of tales is complete, if we dare use the word “complete” with reference to Star Wars. Let not the franchise’s expanding state render us silent on its circular nature, however, especially in light of The Force Awakens. Because when we take a look at the ways in which The Force Awakens “circles back” to its immediate story-line predecessor, A New Hope, we find something unexpected. Certain (circular) elements of The Force Awakens may appear as simple throw-backs meant to bring the story and its audience “full circle,” as it were. Rather, these same elements prove ironic, reversing the audience’s expectations to introduce a new story with new heroes, even from the ruins of the old.

From Plato to Dante to Black Elk, John Granger has made clear the centrality (ahem) of circular imagery in Western literature in describing the numinous, calling the notion an “esoteric touchstone of Western thought.” (Ring Composition, 24) It is this round imagery for God which inspires the ancient tradition of composing great works of literature around a circular, ringed scaffold: the sub-creation (as Tolkien would have it) of the created order reflects its Creator in turn.

SW2Into this long, profound tradition of circular significance rolls a little orange and white droid, no bigger than a Golden Retriever: BB-8. When I first saw BB-8 in promotional materials for The Force Awakens, my first reaction was a dismissive eye-roll: “ok, here’s the R2D2 of the story.” Seeing the film confirmed, in many ways, my initial assessment. That BB-8 is meant to recall and remind audiences of R2D2 is clear from his (her?) scale, design and role in the story. If Droids had relations, BB-8 would be R2’s lil bro. Their functions in the plots of each film also demonstrate the intentional parallels between them. Both droids possess the information which is central to the story: information which requires the interpretation of a seemingly defunct figure from the past (for R2, the long-exiled Obi-Wan Kenobi, and for BB-8, R2D2 himself who has long been dormant on “low power”). Both droids are abandoned to desolate deserts (Tatooine, Jakku) by their masters (Leia, Poe Dameron), where each is captured by scrap scavengers and rescued in some way by each story’s hero (Luke, Rey). Both droids escape their desert exiles on the (round, yet flat) Millennium Falcon.

SW1These similarities are striking, but if we dismiss BB-8 as mere audience-pleasing throw-back on par with “having a bad feeling about this,” we miss an important thematic development which takes Star Wars into the next era. Like BB-8’s design, the significantly circular design of R2D2 points the viewer of A New Hope to that sense of completeness found only in the divine: a smooth contrast to an otherwise sharp-edged universe of TIE-fighters, Star Destroyers and lightsabers. (R2’s original partner in conspiracy, Princess Leia, echoes his round design with her own round hair buns.) And yet, R2’s circular design is incomplete: his dome is only half a circle, and the rest of him looks more like a trash can. BB-8 steps up the circular imagery: that he is working, on-set, puppeteered droid (instead of mere CGI) is a source of wonder on and off screen. “Move, Ball,” Han Solo snaps impatiently at BB-8 on the Millennium Falcon; Han’s lack of warmth for the adorable droid echoes his perpetual role as the skeptic who is, nevertheless, cyclically confronted by numinous reality and forced (Forced?) to acknowledge it.

SW4What the two droids, by comparison, reveal about the heroes of the story and their points of divergence is perhaps most interesting. While R2D2 in A New Hope is sold to Luke Skywalker, he immediately escapes to find Obi-Wan, whereas, in The Force Awakens, after Rey rescues BB-8 from the scavenger, the little droid will not leave her side, even when requested. Luke sets out to rescue R2D2, but his motivation for doing so is to avoid trouble from his uncle, and, we can assume, his fascination with the pretty-girl-hologram R2D2 contains. Rey, in her rescue of BB-8, acts merely out of compassionate instinct. Luke looks at his uncle’s new droids and sees the realization of his own self-centered dreams of adventure far away from Tatooine. Rey, who literally lives in the wreckage of Luke Skywalker’s greatest adventure, looks at BB-8 and with great empathy, sees something – she knows not what – more valuable than even her own food security and survival. Luke had to learn this kind of compassion in the original trilogy; Rey seems hard-wired for it in The Force Awakens. Each hero’s relationship to his or her little round droid draws out this distinction between them.

f38703334Medievalist Rhonda Dubec said something that truly delighted me in a recent episode of the podcast Mugglenet Academia. She said Dumbledore wears half-moon glasses, while Harry wears full-circle glasses, because Harry completes the hero’s journey: a journey Dumbledore, because of his weaker, more self-absorbed nature, could not complete. It delighted me because it was such a simple observation, and yet I’d never spotted it in many years of Potter appreciation. Fans of ring cycles such as Harry Potter and Star Wars should look not merely for meaning in these sagas’ circular structure (which, for Star Wars, is still unrolling), but in each story’s circular symbolism.

In a story that has historically relied so heavily on circles both for its story scaffold and its aesthetic imagery, the character of little round BB-8 and his relationship to Rey could very well point us to what it means – and what it will take – to be a hero in this post-Lucas Star Wars universe. Rey is learning, just as Harry learned on the Quidditch pitch, that sometimes fulfilling your own heroic potential is a matter of keeping your eye on the ball.

Discovery of Historical Inspiration for Tolkien’s One Ring

HistoryToday.com has published the fascinating story of a golden ring from Roman Britain and of two Pembroke College, Oxford, professors who were part of the effort to trace its origins. What’s intriguing about it, at least for serious readers of fantasy fiction, is that these two professors were R. G. Collingwood, archaeologist and dean of metaphysics, and J. R. R. Tolkien, he-who-needs-no-introduction. From the article ‘The Inspiration for Tolkien’s Ring:’

So how much did this story of a lost Roman gold ring influence Tolkien’s fiction? Silvianus loses his gold ring at Lydney, as Gollum lost his under the Misty Mountains. Silvianus believes his ring has been stolen by someone whose name he knows – Senicianus – just as Gollum thinks his ring has been stolen by Bilbo Baggins. Silvianus curses by name the person he suspects. Similarly, when Gollum works out that Bilbo has found and kept his ring, he cries out in rage: ‘Thief, thief, thief! Baggins! We hates it, we hates it, we hates it forever!’ Both Gollum and Silvianus know the identity of the persons they regard as thieves who have stolen their gold rings and both declare these names with maledictions.

However the relationship between Tolkien and Collingwood may have gone deeper. Collingwood’s developing approach to the philosophy of history may have appealed to Tolkien, who once declared that he much preferred history ‘true or feigned’. From 1926 onwards Collingwood was working on the theories that would become his book The Idea of History, in which he proposes the importance of objects as vectors for understanding and imaginatively recreating given historical events – pure gold ring territory.

Do read the whole thing.  My only quibble is the authors’ assertion that the years 1928-1929 were the years in which the form of The Hobbit was taking final shape.” Tolkien doesn’t begin the composition of The Hobbit until 1930 according to the accepted history and writes more than half of it in the months just before publication in 1936 and 1937. That would be the year that he read Williams’ Place of the Lion, a ring composition, when his and CSL’s ideas of what was possible in modern day story telling was re-shaped (re-forged?). For more on that pivotal year, see Bruce Charlton’s notes online in ‘The Notion Club Papers.’

Still, this is a fascinating link, especially given the presence of Collingwood, about whom more after the jump!